Are you looking to provide specific feedback to your students in order to improve their writing? These samples are annotated for the specific skills students applied effectively in their writing and suggestions are included for improvement. Download each sample and use them as a guide to analyze your own student samples and give you the language to provide feedback based on instruction. The suggested lessons can be found in the Empowering Writers Informational/Expository guides.
| Grade 2 - Martial Artist | |
| Grade 3 - Hamsters | |
| Grade 3 - Travel | |
| Grade 3 - Pool Fun | |
| Grade 4 - An Expository Writing Sample Page Link | |
| “Garden School” – Annotated Samples – Narrative, Opinion, & Expository | |
“Dogs” – Expository Annotated Sample |
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