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Informational/Opinion Writing
Grade 4 Sample
Japanese New Year's
Feedback for Improvement
Topic: Japanese New Year
Main Idea #1: Food
Main Idea #2: Family
Main Idea #3: Pictures
What worked:
Feedback with Prescriptive Lesson:
CHOOSE a Focus Skill: What skill will make the biggest impact for this writer?
Introductions: This piece needs an effective lead. The topic sentence was well written.
Conclusions: Needs to include a conclusion that sums up the entire piece.
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