Are you looking to provide specific feedback to your students in order to improve their writing? These samples are annotated for the specific skills students applied effectively in their writing and suggestions are included for improvement. Download each sample and use them as a guide to analyze your own student samples and give you the language to provide feedback based on instruction. The suggested lessons can be found in the Empowering Writers Narrative guides.
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“The Big Hairy Giant” – Narrative Annotated Sample |
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“The Giant” – A Character-Problem-Solution Narrative |
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Grade 1 - "Take me to the Beach" |
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Fully Elaborated Main Event |
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Grade 2 - "Red Wolves" |
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Grade 3 - "Snow Monster" |
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Side by Side Book Covers |
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How to Improve this Piece |
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Get More Details! Activity |
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Narrative Writing Diamond |
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"Garden School" - Annotated Sample |
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"Extremely Weird Adventure" - Annotated Sample |